I again evaluated my script with the help of Mr Becker. In this evaluation we again worked on structuring the document to ensure that all elements were in place to make it an industry standard document. I then again developed elements of the plot in the description of scenes such as the butterfly scene and the rocket to ensure that the description matched the atmosphere and imagery I want to create from the shots and plot. We also decided that the ending still needed to be developed further including lighting in the 'launch' of the rocket.
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